Elevator Pitch No. 3

Unfortunately, I was having some trouble with youtube and uploading my pitch. But here it is written out!

"My name is Carter Nash and my service is called Any Ride. Have you ever been told to take grandma there, or grandpa here. Have you ever had your mother or father begging for a ride to do a simple errand. The problem many elderly and disabled people face is lack of freedom due to their inability to drive. Any Ride provides a fast, reliable, safe, and comfortable solution. With Any Ride, users can call upon comfortable or specialized vehicle that will take them any where they would like to go. The application will also have an online format, for those elderly who may not use smartphones. Through an easy to use app or website, riders can be picked up wherever they are in a matter of minutes. Any Ride is a service designed for the elderly, along with disabled people. With more than 40 million people over the age of 65, I believe Any Ride can skyrocket and become one of the largest transportation movements."

What stood out to me most from the feedback was that I should work on speaking with more clarity and speaking louder. Other than that, the feedback was mostly positive.